Could you correct my ACKNOWLEDGEMENT, thanks

this is my acknowledgement. It is a little difficult for me to express acknowledgement in different styles. Could you have any ways to show the different thanks?. I feel that it is quite tedious when I always say that "thank for his support,..". .

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The student would like to express his gratitude and appreciation to X Ltd for a meaningful and fruitful Industrial Attachment period. He would like to thank to amazing working environment at X and the friendly nature of fellow employees. I always was treated like all other employees.

The student would also like to sincerely thank the following people for their help and support which made the attachment an interesting and enriching experience:

· Mr X( BD Manage ), the student’s Industry Supervisor, for his guidance and trust in all the projects he had assigned to the writer. Mr X continuous support, encouragement and help contributed greatly to the student’s success in all of his projects.

· Prof. X(School of Computer Engineering, X), the student’s X tutor for his patience and invaluable time spent on advising and guiding the student throughout the entire period of the IA.

· Mr X (Senior sale engineer) for his support and detecting software mistakes during the testing and deployment process.

· Ms. X(Sales Coordinator) for her support student about documenting and formatting for outputting word file process.

· Mr. X (Nerwork System Administrator) for his support in setting software and accessing database system of X.

· Miss X who had helped in understanding the Quotation System and had shared her valuable experience in installing of this software. From her opinion, I modified software and made it more friendly and easy-using.

Lastly, student would like to thank all the staffs and colleagues in X Ltd who had rendered any assistance or support to the writer during his IA stint. During IA period, it was really fortunate and my pleasure working with all these people.

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