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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Could you correct me please?



My boyfriend and I have shared our ideas and experiences as we share together on this myspace profile. We don't have time to tell you about us, but you know us, some of my friends and his friends. If you dont know us, then you can make a new friend with us. We won't bite you all.













  

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MySpace is a place to share yourself, not your words edited by others. You should post your text as written.

  • MySpace is a place to share yourself, not your words edited by others.
  • You should post your text as written.
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MySpace is a place to share yourself, not your words edited by others. You should post your text as written.
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My boyfriend and I have shared our ideas and experiences as we share together on this myspace profile. We don't have time to tell you about us, but you know us, some of my friends and his friends. If you dont know us, then you can make a new friend with us. We won't bite you all.

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