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Tenacious Learner Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Could you correct it?

Hi teachers,
Could you correct it?
I have already deposited the money in your bank account.
I have already transferred the money to your bank account. (through the Internet)
I also attach the invoice.

Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

If you mean the grammar/syntax of the three individual sentences, they are fine. As a whole message...........

  • If you mean the grammar/syntax of the three individual sentences, they are fine.
  • As a whole message...........
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If you mean the grammar/syntax of the three individual sentences, they are fine.

As a whole message...........Emotion: rolleyes
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TerryxpressIf you mean the grammar/syntax of the three individual sentences, they are fine.
Hi,
Thank you for your reply.
Yes that's what I mean. It is not a whole mesagge.

TS
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Corrections in red:

''I have already deposited the money in your bank account. (note that you can use into instead of in, if you prefer).
I have already transferred the money to your bank account. (through the Internet)
I have
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Hi,
Thank you for your reply and help.

TS

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