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To Whom It May Concern:

It is a great pleasure for me to recommend XX for the admission to your undergraduate course. He has been my pupil in the computer science class I taught for a two year period of his secondary school education. Over the years, I have come to know him quite well, both as a student and an individual.

XX is bright, energetic and genuinely well rounded student. His grades have been consistently above average, and he has actively participated in class. On occasions he conducted presentations to further develop his knowledge. Main focus of his presentations was on software development in which he invested a lot of his time away from school. In the summer period of his third year, XX started his internship at our school where he improved not just his programing skills, but also his hardware asembly skills and computer maintance. These skills came as a handy to him in his finaly year where he outpreformed all of his peers and made his final thessis on his own computer through reasembly and reprograming.

XX has also contributed to the school community in a variety of ways, most notably through his public speeking and participation on the debate team. Frankly, I am impressed with his creativity, determination and ability to schedule extracurricular activities around a full academic workload. I have never heard XX complain about his workload or refuse any assignment that he has been given. It is not adequate to say that he accepts responsibility readily. He seeks responsibility.

His motivation is not forced upon him, nor does he wear it like a badge. He has tremendous self-discipline. XX is also a dedicated, versatile and talented student who will be an asset to your undergraduate community. He has my respect and my highest recommendation.

May you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely,