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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Could you correct ?

Good afternoon,

Thank you very much for your mail and the time proposal.
The 4th august, I’m away on business. However, I’m available all the other days of the same week, my agenda is quite open.

Could we schedule another time?

I will be delighted to have a telephone interview with your colleagues.

Kind regards.
  

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Not good. Say eg this. Dear Tom (or Dear Mr Smith ), Thank you very much for your email (or letter , if it was paper) I will be delighted to have a telephone interview with your colleagues.

— Clive

  • Not good.
  • Say eg this.
  • Dear Tom (or Dear Mr Smith ), Thank you very much for your email (or letter , if it was paper) I will be delighted to have a telephone interview with your colleagues.
  • On the 4th August, I am away on business.
  • However, I am available on all the other days of the same week, Please let me know which day, and time, is convenient.
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Not good.

Say eg this.

Dear Tom (or Dear Mr Smith),

Thank you very much for your email (or letter, if it was paper) I will be delighted to have a telephone interview with your colleagues.
On the 4th August, I am away on business. However, I am available on all the other days of the same week, Please let me know which day, and time, is con
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I do think that you should enclose your email by writing your name in this case, don't you, please?
CliveYours sincerely,
... then (your name)
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Yes.

I assumed that was obvious.
Perhaps it wasn't.
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