Could you control my motivation letter for scholarship

Hi , I wrote motivation letter for scholarship . does any english speaker control it ?
advice is realy important for me ..

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Melody Provost and I am 24 years old. I graduated from Faculty of Law in July 2017. I have had extensive work experience as a trainee in international law firm respectively CMS Law Firm/Slovenia, RFF&Advogados Law Firm/Portugal, Schoenherr Law Firm/Poland.
I have always been my passion to be lawyer every since I was a little girl. My ideal grew up with me during my entire university life and I wanted to find my inner self and I believed that the feeling of being success certainly starts to see the world. Because for law students, knowledge of the specific regulations of their home country is too narrow a base for counseling firms that are active in international trade.I see myself becoming be an international lawyer.. It is a cliché to say that I’ve always known what I want to do with my life, but in my case, it happens to be true.
France is one of the best countries in the world to study with higher education especially Competition and EU law, working at the international law firm in France is the dream of every lawyer, especially for an ambitious person. During my entire university studies, I have always been keen on EU law and International Law; indeed, as you can see from the enclosed CV. Therefore, the Master of law in France would be for me a good occasion to acquire lots of new skills and strengthen the knowledge I already have in the field. Nevertheless, Master program in English tuition fee is too expensive for non-European citizen and I discovered that most universities accept only graduate students with good knowledge of English and French language. Therefore The universities could not accept me without knowledge of French. The French course means a broad range of career possibilities and special opportunities available for me. I had never an opportunity to learn English in my all school life but when I said myself that you will be an international lawyer, I have started to learn English individually for 2 and half years ago. After 7 months, CMS Law Firm accepted me for a trainee position in Slovenia. This is why I believe myself to learn French quickly for my career. Besides, learning French is a passion for me and after I tried to learn a lot of time on YouTube videos and Google, I can tell that it’s an extremely beautiful and complex language, and I just fell in love with the flow of the sound.
Unfortunately, not everyone is born into a life of opportunity and sometimes just the country you grow up in will dictate a life of hardship and poverty. Furthermore entering the profession is deemed difficult and expensive. Those from lower socioeconomic groups in particular face greater financial barriers, as the training stages required to enter the profession are often costly. I was born into that life but I believed that I will implement my dreams. I was working different job experiences to pay off living expenses during my university life: I worked as call center,seller, office clerk, babysitter, that's helps me not only to be independent and support myself through my studies but also to learn how to be a versatile and flexible person, who think that adaptability is a very important quality in our globalized world. Thus working, living alone abroad as a young woman is a big courage in my culture generally but I can say that I accomplished.
The lack of diversity in the legal profession is an issue which is ubiquitous across countries, cultures, and continents. Understandably, for many young people the legal sector is viewed as a career path which is not available to them. As I found out, equality, diversity, and inclusion are fundamental to your business and are key components of DLA Piper's vision and values. As a leading global business law firm, You have the resources and strength to lead the way in improving access to the profession for future generations.
I am confident that you will find my mail as a worthwhile investment. Since I am not in a position to finance my participation on my own I would also appreciate being considered for a full scholarship for French language course, since this is the only possible way for me to practice my language skills.
Thank you for taking the time to consider this mail and I’m looking forward to your positive response.