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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
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Could you comment on this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you comment on this sentence please?

"The relatively large number of studies has confirmed the association between noise and cortisol, but it can be stated that the relationship between noise annoyance and cortisol, as an indicator of stress, has not been studied.


Thanks!

  

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Here's my version. It's pretty close to yours. A relatively large number of studies have confirmed an association between noise and cortisol, but the relationship between noise annoyance and cortisol as an indicator of stress has not been studied.

— CalifJim

  • Here's my version.
  • It's pretty close to yours.
  • A relatively large number of studies have confirmed an association between noise and cortisol, but the relationship between noise annoyance and cortisol as an indicator of stress has not been studied.
  • CJ
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Here's my version. It's pretty close to yours.

A relatively large number of studies have confirmed an association between noise and cortisol, but the relationship between noise annoyance and cortisol as an indicator of stress has not been studied.

CJ

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