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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Could you comment on this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you comment on this sentence please?

"The increased HPA activity leads to the onset or spread of diseases such as osteoporosis, coronary heart disease, hypertension, diabetes, and diseases related to the immune system."


Thanks!

  

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" Only communicable diseases are spread.

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gillyflower"The increased HPA activity leads to the onset or spread of diseases such as osteoporosis, coronary heart disease, hypertension, diabetes, and diseases related to the immune system."

"The increased HPA activity leads to the onset or spread (wrong word) of diseases such as osteoporosis, coronar

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