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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Could you comment on this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you comment on this sentence please?

"Cultural background, training individuals to manage workplace hazards, and different levels of individual noise sensitivity could have affected the results of the study."

Thanks!

  

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Stylistically, "training individuals to manage workplace hazards" seems mismatched with the other items in the list.

  • Stylistically, "training individuals to manage workplace hazards" seems mismatched with the other items in the list.
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Stylistically, "training individuals to manage workplace hazards" seems mismatched with the other items in the list.

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