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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Could you comment on this sentence please?

Hi,

could you comment on the below sentence please?

"The effect of education on health promotion is not the same for all individuals because people are different in their interests, motivation, and commitment to their hearing health."


Thanks!

  

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Are you talking about all kinds of health, or just auditory health?

— Clive

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Are you talking about all kinds of health, or just auditory health?

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I find it confusing that you start talking about heath in general. Do you need to?

Clive

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