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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Could you comment on this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you comment on this sentence please?

"Adequate lighting is an important factor in visual work and is recommended for different types of jobs."


Thanks!

  

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The use of "different" is my concern. \ Adequate lighting is an important factor in visual work and is recommended for other types of jobs as well.

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  • The use of "different" is my concern.
  • \ Adequate lighting is an important factor in visual work and is recommended for other types of jobs as well.
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The use of "different" is my concern. I would say "other" instead of "different." Additionally, I would add "as well" at the end of the sentence.\

Adequate lighting is an important factor in visual work and is recommended for other types of jobs as well.

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gillyfloweris recommended essential for different various types of jobs.

Try that.

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