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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
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Could you comment on this sentence?

Could you comment on my sentence below?

"The first group which was instructed through the independent variable of flipped instruction was more active and engaged compared with the control group which was taught the reading skill through the lecture method."


Thanks!

  

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It seems a bit long and wordy to me. I suggest this. " Clive

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  • It seems a bit long and wordy to me.
  • I suggest this.
  • " Clive
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It seems a bit long and wordy to me.

I suggest this.

"The group which was taught by flipped instruction was more active and engaged than the control group, which was taught by the lecture method."

Clive

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