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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Could you comment on this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"Contrary to popular belief, it is important to know that neck problems are rarely caused suddenly by a single blow, accident, or severe injury. Neck diseases often take months or even years to develop."


Thanks!

  

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The way you have it, people think that is is not important to know that, which is not what you mean. There is also a clash between "rarely" and "often". "It is important to know that, contrary to popular belief, neck problems are rarely caused suddenly by a single blow, accident, or severe injury.

  • The way you have it, people think that is is not important to know that, which is not what you mean.
  • There is also a clash between "rarely" and "often".
  • "It is important to know that, contrary to popular belief, neck problems are rarely caused suddenly by a single blow, accident, or severe injury.
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The way you have it, people think that is is not important to know that, which is not what you mean. There is also a clash between "rarely" and "often".

"It is important to know that, contrary to popular belief, neck problems are rarely caused suddenly by a single blow, accident, or severe injury. Neck diseases usually take months or even years to develop."

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