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Could you comment on the following paragraph please?
"The participants in this study consisted of 25 male and female students aged 8-10 from the primary schools of X Rural District of Y County, who were selected in an accessible and purposeful manner based on the inclusion criteria. To conduct the research, an introductory meeting was held with parents in coordination with school principals."
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Could you comment on the following paragraph please? "The participants in this study consisted of were 25 male and female students aged 8-10 from the primary schools of X Rural District of Y County, who were selected in an accessible and purposeful manner based on the inclusion criteria. " in an accessible and purposeful manner This is a very vague phrase.
- Could you comment on the following paragraph please?
- "The participants in this study consisted of were 25 male and female students aged 8-10 from the primary schools of X Rural District of Y County, who were selected in an accessible and purposeful manner based on the inclusion criteria.
- " in an accessible and purposeful manner This is a very vague phrase.
- Say what you mean more clearly.
- the inclusion criteria 'The' makes it sound like your readers already know about these criteria.
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Could you comment on the following paragraph please?
"The participants in this study consisted of were 25 male and female students aged 8-10 from the primary schools of X Rural District of Y County, who were selected in an accessible and purposeful manner based on the inclusion criteria. To conduct the research, an introductory meeting was held with parents in coordination wit
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