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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you comment on the following paragraph please?

"Considering the X% prevalence of voice disorders among faculty members and its effect on the total score of VHI, our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching. "

  

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Could you comment on the following paragraph please? "Considering the X% prevalence of voice disorders among faculty members and its effect on their total VHI score of VHI, our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching. " _______________________________________________________ "Considering that most faculty members (63%) have voice disorders, and the effect of this on their total VHI scores , our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching.

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  • Could you comment on the following paragraph please?
  • "Considering the X% prevalence of voice disorders among faculty members and its effect on their total VHI score of VHI, our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching.
  • " _______________________________________________________ "Considering that most faculty members (63%) have voice disorders, and the effect of this on their total VHI scores , our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching.
  • " VHI scores is there a difference between a person's VHI score and their total VHI score?
  • Considering the X% prevalence of voice disorders among faculty members I've tried to say this a simpler way above.
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Could you comment on the following paragraph please?

"Considering the X% prevalence of voice disorders among faculty members and its effect on their total VHI score of VHI, our results confirm that education, prevention and treatment programs are critical to lessen the frequency of voice disorders related to teaching. "

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