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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you comment on this please?

Hi,

Could you comment on the following paragraph please?

"The aim of this study was to compare the head, neck and upper trunk postures of patients undergoing coronary artery bypass grafting with healthy individuals. In this case-control study, 25 men who had referred to X Cardiac Rehabilitation Center in [name of the city where the center is located] and underwent coronary artery bypass grafting (CABG) were randomly selected. The angles of forward head, kyphosis of the dorsal region and roundness of the shoulder were measured. 25 identical healthy men were also evaluated and compared in terms of the above variables."


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gillyflower "The aim of this study was to compare the head, neck and upper trunk postures of patients undergoing who underwent coronary artery bypass grafting with those of healthy individuals. In this case-control study, 25 men who had been referred to X Cardiac Rehabilitation Center in [name of the city where the center is located] and underwent coronary artery bypass grafting grafts (CABG) were randomly selected. The angles of forward head, kyphosis of the dorsal region and round ed ness of the shoulder were measured.

— Teechr

  • gillyflower "The aim of this study was to compare the head, neck and upper trunk postures of patients undergoing who underwent coronary artery bypass grafting with those of healthy individuals.
  • In this case-control study, 25 men who had been referred to X Cardiac Rehabilitation Center in [name of the city where the center is located] and underwent coronary artery bypass grafting grafts (CABG) were randomly selected.
  • The angles of forward head, kyphosis of the dorsal region and round ed ness of the shoulder were measured.
  • " "Identical" is wrong in the above.
  • I doubt that you can find 25 identical men anywhere in the world.
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gillyflower

"The aim of this study was to compare the head, neck and upper trunk postures of patients undergoing who underwent coronary artery bypass grafting with those of healthy individuals. In this case-control study, 25 men who had been

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