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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you comment on this please?

Hi,

Could you comment on the following please?

"One patient from each group could not follow the intervention period due to a flare-up of their disease at the beginning of the study before taking the first dose of the capsule (CoQ10 and placebo) and also because Cinnora (adalimumab) and Remicade (Infliximabe) should be added to their other medication protocol."


Thanks!

  

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gillyflower follow the intervention period What does that mean? gillyflower and also because Does that apply to both patients? " What do you mean by "because ....

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gillyflowerfollow the intervention period

What does that mean?

gillyflowerand also because

Does that apply to both patients?

gillyflowerbecause Cinnora (adalimumab) and Remicade (Infliximabe) should be added to their other medication protocol."

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Your meaning is not clear to me. When you write one very long sentence, it leads to confusion.

Consider this version.

One patient from each group could not follow the intervention period. This was because of a flare-up of their disease at the beginning of the study before they took the first dose of the capsule (CoQ10 and placebo), and also because Cinnora (adalimumab) and Remicade

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Cliveshould be added does not sound right. Can you say it another way?

Could you please explain a bit more why "should be added" isn't right here?

Thanks!I


I interpret your text as a description of a study that was conducted in the past. eg One patient ... could not follow . . .

But in "Cinno

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