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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you comment on this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"The authors wish to thank all those who contributed directly or indirectly to this research. In particular, we thank all participants, all members of X Hospital Colorectal Research center, and Y University of Medical Sciences.

Thanks!

  

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All participants in what? Are you sure a research center has members? Why single out the members in one place and then thank the entire institution in the next?

  • All participants in what?
  • Are you sure a research center has members?
  • Why single out the members in one place and then thank the entire institution in the next?
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All participants in what? Are you sure a research center has members? Why single out the members in one place and then thank the entire institution in the next?

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gillyflowerThe authors wish to thank all those who contributed directly or indirectly to this research. In particular, we thank all participants, all members of X Hospital Colorectal Research Center personnel, and Y University of Medical Sciences

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