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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you comment on this please?

Hi,

Could you comment on this please? Is there any other way to write this paragraph?

"The participants in this study were reported to have little willingness to buy genetically modified products. Consequently, if the individuals' knowledge on the benefits of GMFs is increased, they will show more tendencies to buy these products."


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The participants in this study were reported to have little willingness to enthusiasm for buy ing genetically modified products. Consequently, if the individuals' knowledge on awareness of the benefits of GMFs is increased, they will show be more tendencies likely to buy these products.

  • The participants in this study were reported to have little willingness to enthusiasm for buy ing genetically modified products.
  • Consequently, if the individuals' knowledge on awareness of the benefits of GMFs is increased, they will show be more tendencies likely to buy these products.
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The participants in this study were reported to have little willingness to enthusiasm for buying genetically modified products. Consequently, if the individuals' knowledge on awareness of the benefits of GMFs is increased,

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