Could you comment on this paragraph please?
Hi,
Could you comment on this paragraph please? By special libraries I mean libraries which are not public.
"Since the libraries of Medical Sciences are special ones, and they contain very thick and heavy reference books which are needed by students every day and are frequently borrowed from librarians; and as there are differences in relationships between students and Librarians working in academic libraries with those between public library clientele and librarians; and since students and public library clienteles differ in motivation for using the libraries, the results of the simultaneous study of musculoskeletal pain and burnout factors are likely to vary between librarians working in public and special libraries."
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gillyflower and as there are differences in relationships between students and Librarians working in academic libraries with those between public library clientele and librarians; and since students and public library clienteles differ in motivation for using the libraries That's vague. Consider rephrasing it clearly and concisely. gillyflower the results of the simultaneous study Is that one or several studies?
- gillyflower and as there are differences in relationships between students and Librarians working in academic libraries with those between public library clientele and librarians; and since students and public library clienteles differ in motivation for using the libraries That's vague.
- Consider rephrasing it clearly and concisely.
- gillyflower the results of the simultaneous study Is that one or several studies?
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gillyflowerand as there are differences in relationships between students and Librarians working in academic libraries with those between public library clientele and librarians; and since students and public library clienteles differ in motivation for using the libraries
That's vague. Consider rephrasing it clearly and concisely.
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