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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you comment on this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could you comment on the below paragraph please?

"Noise is known as one of the most widespread harmful factors in the workplace. Annoyance caused by noise pollution, as a measurable mental response, is one of the most significant negative effects of noise. Annoyance from environmental noise is affected by several non-acoustic factors such as personality traits and hearing sensitivity or attitude. This purpose of this study was to investigate the effect of hearing conservation instruction on noise annoyance of workers of a textile industry."


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gillyflower "Noise is known as one of the most widespread harmful debilitating factors in the workplace. Annoyance caused by noise pollution, as a measurable mental response, is one of the most significant negative effects of noise. The level of a nnoyance from environmental noise is affected by several non-acoustic factors such as personality trait s, and hearing sensitivity or attitude.

  • gillyflower "Noise is known as one of the most widespread harmful debilitating factors in the workplace.
  • Annoyance caused by noise pollution, as a measurable mental response, is one of the most significant negative effects of noise.
  • The level of a nnoyance from environmental noise is affected by several non-acoustic factors such as personality trait s, and hearing sensitivity or attitude.
  • " Can you rephrase the underlined part?
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gillyflower"Noise is known as one of the most widespread harmful debilitating factors in the workplace. Annoyance caused by noise pollution, as a measurable mental response, is one of the most significant negative effects of noise. The level of annoyance from enviro

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