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Exodus74 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you chek my essay please?

I was born in a family of artists. My grandfather was artist and he instilled the love of learning the arts in me. When I was a child we lived near the forest with the lovely streams, I spent many times playing there. When I grew up I studied at an art college and painted a lot sketches over there. After college I successfully participated in exhibitions. Fifteen years ago, my father passed away and I stopped painting. I was so depressed and I worked hard at the construction site to provide for my family. I picked up my brush and palette to paint again after my moving to Beautiful British Columbia. I chose this province because the nature here is beautiful. I spend many days sightseeing and hiking here. I am doing landscapes mostly. I love green colors and  spend a lot of time showing off details of my paintings. 
I always think how the world around us is fragile . When I paint landscapes I do so with the soulful and truthful purpose...to savor the colors of the moment.
  

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  • My grandfather was an artist and he instilled the love of learning the arts in me.
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  • When I grew up I studied at an art college and painted a lot sketches in that forest.
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I was born into a family of artists. My grandfather was an artist and he instilled the love of learning the arts in me. When I was a child, we lived near a forest with the lovely streams, I spent many hours (you can use any time expression here.) times playing there. When I grew up I studied at an art college and painted a lot sketche
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Thanks a lot !! Probably I should pay attention in using articles (the and a)

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