Could you check this writing please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"Given that disability is, nowadays, the result of interaction between the individual and his environment, it is necessary to identify the role of facilitating or inhibiting environmental factors to reduce the effects of disability and to increase the impact of rehabilitation interventions. However, the study results have shown that the role of the environment in the treatment of stroke patients is less addressed. Also, X (2015) has shown that occupational therapists and physiotherapists should pay more attention to environmental factors in the evaluation and treatment procedure to achieve a comprehensive approach to stroke. Therefore, it seems that the clinical use of the ICF-Core Set and the examination of its environmental codes leads firstly to investigate important environmental factors affected stroke patients' performance and health, and secondly, provide the necessary treatment measures."

Thanks!