Could you check this writing exercise, thank you.

Sadaharu Oh is also known for lots of popular sayings. One of my favorites is, "The time to fight against the enemies is short. A conflict with oneself will decide the outcome." That means that the assessment of your efforts is given in a second; the most important thing in order to get the glory is to sustain one's efforts every day. I think this is true because those who are having inactive lives can't gain any benefits; only those who are making efforts in their daily lives will be able to 'receive the laurels'.