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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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Learning about how complex and profound the lives of living things increases our love for them and makes us realize that we are not special. This awareness prevents us from holding human-centered views. I think that children today tend to lose touch with life, so raising their awareness through education is especially important.
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Learning about [ how complex and profound the lives of living things are ] increases our love for them and makes us realize that we are not special. This awareness prevents us from holding selfish human-centered views. I think that children today tend to lose touch with life, so raising their awareness through education is especially important.
- Learning about [ how complex and profound the lives of living things are ] increases our love for them and makes us realize that we are not special.
- This awareness prevents us from holding selfish human-centered views.
- I think that children today tend to lose touch with life, so raising their awareness through education is especially important.
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Learning about [ how complex and profound the lives of living things are ] increases our love for them and makes us realize that we are not special. This awareness prevents us from holding selfish human-centered views. I think that children today tend to lose touch with life, so raising their awareness through education is especially important.
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Thank you very much, Alphecca Stars for your correction. I really like your idea about putting "selfish" instead of human-centered views, which sounds the sentence more effectiveve! As for the first sentence, I've just noticed that "are" is obviously missing!! Thank you very much for pointint that out.
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