Could you check this sentence please?
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Could you check the following please?
"The only study that examined the prevalence of voice disorders among university teaching faculty members, found it to be 47 out of a hundred participants."
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The only study that examined the prevalence of voice disorders among university teachers found they existed in 47 out of a hundred participants" university teaching faculty members, Using so many nouns as adjectives is awkward and potentially confusing. I suggest simply university teachers. no comma before 'found'.
- The only study that examined the prevalence of voice disorders among university teachers found they existed in 47 out of a hundred participants" university teaching faculty members, Using so many nouns as adjectives is awkward and potentially confusing.
- I suggest simply university teachers.
- no comma before 'found'.
- found it to be Your sentence structure means that 'it' refers to 'the prevalence'.
- This doesn't sound quite right to me.
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The only study that examined the prevalence of voice disorders among university teachers found they existed in 47 out of a hundred participants"
university teaching faculty members, Using so many nouns as adjectives is awkward and potentially confusing. I suggest simply university teachers.
no comma before 'found'.
found it to be Your senten
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