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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check this sentence please? Is it correct to use "some" instead of "some of them"?

"Research shows that approximately 1% of children experience swallowing difficulties, though the incidence is higher in some, such as children with cerebral palsy and brain injury."

Thanks!

  

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It's fine, but you can use another word instead of the second "children". Do you know which?

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  • It's fine, but you can use another word instead of the second "children".
  • Do you know which?
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It's fine, but you can use another word instead of the second "children". Do you know which?

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