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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
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Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check this sentence please?

Muscle imbalance between the stabilizers and mobilizers of the neck and shoulders leads to increased work-related pressure, surface muscles fatigue and deep muscles atrophy, which in turn leads to many health problems, such as neck pain and disability.


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gillyflower Muscle imbalance between the stabilizers and mobilizers of the neck and shoulders leads to increased work-related pressure . S urface muscles fatigue and deep muscles atrophy, which in turn leads to many health problems, such as neck pain and disability. At a bare minimum this has to be split into two sentences.

  • gillyflower Muscle imbalance between the stabilizers and mobilizers of the neck and shoulders leads to increased work-related pressure .
  • S urface muscles fatigue and deep muscles atrophy, which in turn leads to many health problems, such as neck pain and disability.
  • At a bare minimum this has to be split into two sentences.
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gillyflowerMuscle imbalance between the stabilizers and mobilizers of the neck and shoulders leads to increased work-related pressure. Surface muscles fatigue and deep muscles atrophy, which in turn leads to many health problems, such as neck pain and disability.

At a bare minimum this has to be split into t

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