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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check this sentence please?

"Noise annoyance depends, to a greater degree on the noise meaning and its predictability, and to a lesser degree on the noise level."

Thanks!

  

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The comma after "depends" should be deleted. "the noise meaning" sounds odd to me. We do not normally imagine "noise" to have a "meaning".

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  • The comma after "depends" should be deleted.
  • "the noise meaning" sounds odd to me.
  • We do not normally imagine "noise" to have a "meaning".
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The comma after "depends" should be deleted.

"the noise meaning" sounds odd to me. We do not normally imagine "noise" to have a "meaning".

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