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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check the sentence below please?

"To do their everyday activities, whether indoor or outdoor, people need natural or artificial light, a variety of types of which, such as light emitting diode (LED), fluorescent, etc., is nowadays used."


Thanks!

  

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The sentence is wordy and awkward. It needs some work. Try again.

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The sentence is wordy and awkward. It needs some work. Try again.

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