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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check my sentence below?

"The study of rat liver tissue showed that glutathione level decreased during the light cycle and increased during the dark cycle, but the MDA level showed an opposite result."


Thanks!

  

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The study of rat liver tissue showed that glutathione levels decreased during the light cycle and increased during the dark cycle, while the MDA levels showed an opposite result. Incidentally, I wonder why you use "the" before MDA, but not before glutathione. Not knowing how you made those decisions, I did not change that.

  • The study of rat liver tissue showed that glutathione levels decreased during the light cycle and increased during the dark cycle, while the MDA levels showed an opposite result.
  • Incidentally, I wonder why you use "the" before MDA, but not before glutathione.
  • Not knowing how you made those decisions, I did not change that.
  • Maybe you want to insert "the" before glutathione or delete it before MDA.
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The study of rat liver tissue showed that glutathione levels decreased during the light cycle and increased during the dark cycle, while the MDA levels showed an opposite result.


Incidentally, I wonder why you use "the" before MDA, but not before glutathione. Not knowing how you made those decisions, I did not change that. Maybe you want to insert "the" before glutathione or delete

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