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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
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Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check the following sentence please?

"Our study revealed that light intensity could be an effective factor contributing to the occurrence of oxidative stress during the first seven days of exposure."


Thanks!

  

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gillyflower could be an effective factor contributing to the occurrence of Consider using "can contribute to" instead of the above.

  • gillyflower could be an effective factor contributing to the occurrence of Consider using "can contribute to" instead of the above.
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gillyflowercould be an effective factor contributing to the occurrence of

Consider using "can contribute to" instead of the above.

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