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Gillyflower Posted 9 years ago
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Could you check this sentence please?

Hi,

Could you check the sentence below please?

" Regarding the importance of traffic accidents, we should note that some studies consider road traffic accident as an indicator of the quality of life in different countries.

Thanks!

  

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gillyflower Regarding the importance of traffic accidents, we should note that some studies consider road traffic accident as an indicator of the quality of life in different countries. The first part is useless. Some studies consider road traffic accidents an indicator of the quality of life in many countries.

  • gillyflower Regarding the importance of traffic accidents, we should note that some studies consider road traffic accident as an indicator of the quality of life in different countries.
  • The first part is useless.
  • Some studies consider road traffic accidents an indicator of the quality of life in many countries.
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gillyflowerRegarding the importance of traffic accidents, we should note that some studies consider road traffic accident as an indicator of the quality of life in different countries.

The first part is useless.

Some studies consider road traffic accidents an indicator of the q

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