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Lucus Ong Posted 17 years ago
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Could you check this sentence for me?
Girl, not as persevering as Jolin Tsai, may find fattening food e.g. chocalates, ice-cream and so forth irresistible and get fat.
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My sentence means that if girl is not persevering enough as Jolin Tsai, they may be unable to resist the seduction of fattening food which is delicious and eat to much of them and then become fat
- My sentence means that if girl is not persevering enough as Jolin Tsai, they may be unable to resist the seduction of fattening food which is delicious and eat to much of them and then become fat
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My sentence means that if girl is not persevering enough as Jolin Tsai, they may be unable to resist the seduction of fattening food which is delicious and eat to much of them and then become fat
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Girls not as persevering as Jolin Tsai may find fattening foods, e.g. chocalates, ice-cream and so forth, irresistible and grow fat.
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Hi,
Girl, not as persevering as Jolin Tsai, may find fattening food e.g. chocalates, ice-cream and so forth irresistible and get fat.
Here are a few additional comments.
'Persevering' is not a very good word to choose here. Consider 'determined', 'strong-willed'.
If you say 'e.g.', don't also say 'and so forth', because 'e.g.' means 'here are some
Girl, not as persevering as Jolin Tsai, may find fattening food e.g. chocalates, ice-cream and so forth irresistible and get fat.
Here are a few additional comments.
'Persevering' is not a very good word to choose here. Consider 'determined', 'strong-willed'.
If you say 'e.g.', don't also say 'and so forth', because 'e.g.' means 'here are some
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