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TeacherJapan Posted 9 years ago
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Could you check this sentence about American culture?

The visitors' encounter with American culture was so surprising and their impressions were so vivid that I was often astonished when they clearly pointed out some facts I had taken for granted after so many years of living in the U.S..
  

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teacherJapan teacherJapan wrote: Could you check this sentence about American culture? It could use tightening. S.

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  • teacherJapan teacherJapan wrote: Could you check this sentence about American culture?
  • It could use tightening.
  • S.
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teacherJapanteacherJapan wrote: Could you check this sentence about American culture?
It could use tightening.

The visitors' encounter with American culture was so surprising and their impressions were so vivid that I was astonished when they pointed out facts I had taken for granted after living so many years in the U.S.
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Thank you very much. It flows much better. Emotion: surprise
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