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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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People in advanced countries tend to ignore how high their standard of living is and only seek their own happiness.
  

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teacherJapan People in advanced countries tend to ignore how high their standard of living is and only seek their own happiness. I find the statement a bit incoherent. I see the ignorance of their standard of living as being somehow out of connection with seeking their own happiness.

  • teacherJapan People in advanced countries tend to ignore how high their standard of living is and only seek their own happiness.
  • I find the statement a bit incoherent.
  • I see the ignorance of their standard of living as being somehow out of connection with seeking their own happiness.
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teacherJapan People in advanced countries tend to ignore how high their standard of living is and only seek their own happiness.
I find the statement a bit incoherent. I see the ignorance of their standard of living as being somehow out of connection with seeking their own happiness.
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I see your point:) Thank you very much:)

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