Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following paragraph please?

"The environmental factors were assessed among the intervention group. For this purpose, a home environment assessment was performed for each patient. In order to increase the patients' functional level, necessary consultations were provided, and required adaptations were taken to the home environment. Some examples include installing grab bars in the toilet, removing barriers from the bathroom entrance, using slip-resistant flooring in the toilet and bathroom. Also, interventions such as compensatory strategies (one-handed techniques) of dressing and shoe lacing were provided. According to the environmental factors included in the ICF-Core Set for stroke, emotional support from the family and friends, mobility aids, adaptations when home visiting, changing others' attitudes, and using other medical services are among the important issues affecting patients' function, which was considered during the assessments and the required interventions and consultations were provided."

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