Hi,
Could you check this please?
"Post-stroke occupational therapy is mainly focused on improving the functional activities of patients at home, disregarding the patient's performance in the social and work environment and ultimately their return to society. Therefore, an assistive model that can help therapists to take a comprehensive view of the functional status of patients is the ICF model."
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"Current post-stroke occupational therapy is mainly focused on improving the functional activity of patients at home, disregarding the patient's performance in the social and work environment and ultimately their return to society. " There was nothing for "therefore" to apply to. I replaced it with "instead".
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"Current post-stroke occupational therapy is mainly focused on improving the functional activity of patients at home, disregarding the patient's performance in the social and work environment and ultimately their return to society. An assistive model that can help therapists instead to take a comprehensive view of the functional status of patients is the ICF model."
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