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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"Individuals who met the inclusion criteria were randomly assigned to each of the intervention or control groups after obtaining the consent form, collecting demographic information, and performing initial assessments. Randomization was performed by selecting 30 slips of papers numbered 1 to 30, placed inside the sealed envelopes. The patient selected an envelope; even numbers were assigned to the intervention group and odd numbers to the control group. The selected envelope was then removed and the procedure was repeated for the next patient."


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gillyflower Could you check the following please? The individuals were not the ones who did those things. The reader has moved on from the envelope selection and is puzzled when you return to it.

  • gillyflower Could you check the following please?
  • The individuals were not the ones who did those things.
  • The reader has moved on from the envelope selection and is puzzled when you return to it.
  • I might change it thus: "Individuals who met the inclusion criteria were randomly assigned to each of the intervention or control groups after submitting the consent form, providing demographic information, and undergoing initial assessments.
  • Randomization was performed by placing 30 slips of papers numbered 1 to 30 inside sealed envelopes, which were then shuffled.
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gillyflowerCould you check the following please?

The individuals were not the ones who did those things. The reader has moved on from the envelope selection and is puzzled when you return to it. I might change it thus:

"Individuals who met the inclusion criteria were randomly assigned to each of the intervention or control groups after submitting the

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