Could you check this please?
Hi,
Could you check this please? Does "the room is provided" sound fine in this sentence?
"In rhythmic movement games, the child is obliged to observe the predetermined patterns of the game, and if repeated and practiced, the room is provided for the improvement of memory scales, especially active memory."
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"the room is provided" is fine in itself, but the sentence overall doesn't read correctly. It implies that the provision of the room is contingent on the patterns being repeated and practised, which is an odd concept.
- "the room is provided" is fine in itself, but the sentence overall doesn't read correctly.
- It implies that the provision of the room is contingent on the patterns being repeated and practised, which is an odd concept.
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"the room is provided" is fine in itself, but the sentence overall doesn't read correctly. It implies that the provision of the room is contingent on the patterns being repeated and practised, which is an odd concept.
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