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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you comment on the following please?

" One of the elements of the social skills is the theory of mind. The theory of mind lies at the heart of social relationships and broadly refers to the ability to understand emotions, motivations, thoughts, and subsequently to understand the behaviors of others. Besides, some cognitive abilities such as intelligence, processing capacity, and memory affect the theory of mind."


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"One of the elements of the social skills is the theory of mind. The theory of mind lies at the heart of social relationships and broadly refers to the ability to understand emotions, motivations AND thoughts, and subsequently to understand the behaviors of others. " In terms of grammar, I just have one small edit, above .

  • "One of the elements of the social skills is the theory of mind.
  • The theory of mind lies at the heart of social relationships and broadly refers to the ability to understand emotions, motivations AND thoughts, and subsequently to understand the behaviors of others.
  • " In terms of grammar, I just have one small edit, above .
  • In terms of meaning, I don't find this paragraph very clear.
  • Clive As fo meaning,
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"One of the elements of the social skills is the theory of mind. The theory of mind lies at the heart of social relationships and broadly refers to the ability to understand emotions, motivations AND thoughts, and subsequently to understand the behaviors of others. Besides, some cognitive abilities such as intelligence, processing capacity, and memory affect the theory of mind
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gillyflowerOne of the elements of the social skills is the theory of mind.

That's vague.

gillyflowerBesides, some cognitive abilities such as intelligence, processing capacity, and memory affect the theory of mind.

"affect" doesn't make sense here.

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