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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following paragraph please?

"The main risk factors for this disorder include bad postures, long surgeries, disability, weakness and high age. In addition, the strength of the antigravity muscles and the ability to maintain an upright posture would decrease after surgery. Therefore, the correct alignment of the body changes and the patient tends for forward head."


Thanks!

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gillyflower The main risk factors for this disorder include bad postures, long surgeries, disability, physical weakness and high old age. See above. gillyflower In addition, the strength of the antigravity muscles and the ability to maintain an upright posture would decrease after surgery.

— Teechr

  • gillyflower The main risk factors for this disorder include bad postures, long surgeries, disability, physical weakness and high old age.
  • See above.
  • gillyflower In addition, the strength of the antigravity muscles and the ability to maintain an upright posture would decrease after surgery.
  • Why did you use "would", and how does the above sentence relate to the one before it?
  • " 1- Do you mean that the body gets a new correct alignment?
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gillyflowerThe main risk factors for this disorder include bad postures, long surgeries, disability, physical weakness and high old age.

See above.

gillyflowerIn addition, the strength of the antigravity muscles and the ability to mai
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