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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"No similar study was found on the comparison of the angles of forward head, shoulder roundedness, and dorsal kyphosis between patients undergone CABG and healthy individuals so that we can compare the results with those of the present study."


Thanks!

  

Top answer

"Undergone" looks like it should be either "undergoing" or "who have undergone" or "having undergone". "Can" should be "could" because you really can't. "The results" might be better as "its results" to make it clearer you mean the non-existent ones.

  • "Undergone" looks like it should be either "undergoing" or "who have undergone" or "having undergone".
  • "Can" should be "could" because you really can't.
  • "The results" might be better as "its results" to make it clearer you mean the non-existent ones.
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"Undergone" looks like it should be either "undergoing" or "who have undergone" or "having undergone". "Can" should be "could" because you really can't. "The results" might be better as "its results" to make it clearer you mean the non-existent ones.

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