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Gillyflower Posted 5 years ago
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Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"Coronary artery disease refers to the narrowing or blockage of all or part of the arterial duct which is caused following atherosclerosis, spasm, or the presence of a clot. The artery affected by this disease cannot meet the myocardial nutrient demand for oxygen, which results in angina and heart attack. According to research conducted in [name of the country], mortality rate due to this disease is high, which is the leading cause of death in the country."


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Here are a few edit suggestions. "Coronary artery disease refers to the narrowing or blockage of all or part of the arterial duct which is caused by following atherosclerosis, spasm, or the presence of a clot. The artery affected by this disease cannot meet the myocardial nutrient demand for oxygen, which results in angina and heart attack.

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  • Here are a few edit suggestions.
  • "Coronary artery disease refers to the narrowing or blockage of all or part of the arterial duct which is caused by following atherosclerosis, spasm, or the presence of a clot.
  • The artery affected by this disease cannot meet the myocardial nutrient demand for oxygen, which results in angina and heart attack.
  • " Clive
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Here are a few edit suggestions.

"Coronary artery disease refers to the narrowing or blockage of all or part of the arterial duct which is caused by following atherosclerosis, spasm, or the presence of a clot. The artery affected by this disease cannot meet the myocardial nutrient demand for oxygen, which results in angina and heart attack. According to research conduct

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