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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check this please? Shall I break the sentence into two or more ones?

" It has been identified that the Nrf2 plays as a major modulator to enhance the cellular antioxidant defense system and the anti-inflammatory gene expression that can protect cells against oxidative damage and also contributes to the anti-inflammatory activity of cells by the antioxidant response element (ARE), thus can affect the course of inflammatory diseases."


Thanks!

  

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Shall I break the sentence into two or more ones? Yes. Your meaning is not completely clear in this long sentence.

  • Shall I break the sentence into two or more ones?
  • Yes.
  • Your meaning is not completely clear in this long sentence.
  • If you want to post an amended version, we'd be happy to check it for you.
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Shall I break the sentence into two or more ones? Yes. Your meaning is not completely clear in this long sentence. If you want to post an amended version, we'd be happy to check it for you.

" It has been identified that the Nrf2 plays acts as a major modulator to enhance the cellular antioxidant defense system and the anti-inflammatory gene expression that

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