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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you check this please?

Hi,

Could you check the following please?

"Mobility decreases the incidence of shoulder pain in librarians. This finding has been reported in previous studies. In the current study, it was found that pain in any part of the librarian's body impairs the normal functioning of that part while working. It should be pointed out that librarians' dysfunction due to musculoskeletal pain can affect their productivity and the quality of services provided."


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No obvious mistakes, but for clarity, I would add the agent. "Mobility decreases the incidence of shoulder pain in librarians. This finding has been reported in previous studies.

  • No obvious mistakes, but for clarity, I would add the agent.
  • "Mobility decreases the incidence of shoulder pain in librarians.
  • This finding has been reported in previous studies.
  • In the current study, it was found that pain in any part of the librarian's body impairs the normal functioning of that part while the librarian is working.
  • "
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No obvious mistakes, but for clarity, I would add the agent.

"Mobility decreases the incidence of shoulder pain in librarians. This finding has been reported in previous studies. In the current study, it was found that pain in any part of the librarian's body impairs the normal functioning of that part while the librarian is working. It should be pointed out that librarians

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