Hi,
Could you check the following please?
"Industrialization has caused greater exposure of individuals to noise. One of the major hazards of the textile industry is noise pollution, which, depending on exposure time, sound intensity and frequency, and individual sensitivity can reduce temporary or permanent hearing thresholds and physical and mental disorders of the staffs exposed to it."
Thanks!
gillyflower "Industrialization has caused greater exposure of individuals to noise. " My version for your comparison: Industrialization has brought greater exposure to noise. In fact, one of the major hazards of the textile industry is noise pollution, which can reduce hearing thresholds temporarily or even permanently, depending on several factors, such as exposure time, intensity, and frequency, as well as individual sensitivity.
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gillyflower"Industrialization has caused greater exposure of individuals to noise. One of the major hazards of the textile industry is noise pollution, which, depending on exposure time, sound intensity and frequency, and individual sensitivity can reduce temporary or permanent hearing thresholds and physical and mental disorders of the staffs exposed to it."