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Hi,Could you check the following paragraph please?"The new flipped learning is a pedagogical approach that can give rise to different potentials for the traditional system of education in all areas, including second language teaching. This study, therefore, aimed at investigating the effect of flipped learning- teaching method on the improvement of Persian-language learners' reading skills and activities in the context of the second language acquisition. The statistical population consisted of 57 eighth grade language learners aged 14-15 of the International girls' school in Tehran. The research method is quantitative and experimental. Using the Placement Test results, middle-level language learners were selected through convenience sampling and were randomly divided into control (28 students) and experimental (29 students) groups.Thanks!

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gillyflower new flipped learning

The exact meaning of "flipped learning" might need some explanation. Putting the idea that it is a new approach in the same sentence as generalizing about its potential is confusing.

gillyflowerthat can give rise to different potentials for the traditional system of education in all areas

'Potential' is usually singular/uncountable. The verb is usually 'have'. 'Different ... for' ??

gillyflowerof flipped learning- teaching method

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gillyflowerThis study, therefore, aimed

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gillyflowerof the International girls' school

at the International Girls' School ???

gillyflowerflipped learning

Wikipedia has a page on the 'flipped classroom' approach. Is this different or is your terminology unusual?

"A flipped classroom is an instructional strategy and a type of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blended_learning that reverses the traditional https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Learning_environment by delivering instructional content, often online, outside of the classroom. It moves activities, including those that may have traditionally been considered homework, into the classroom. In a flipped classroom, students watch https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_lecture, collaborate in online discussions, or carry out research at home while engaging in concepts in the classroom with the guidance of a mentor.

In the traditional model of classroom instruction, the teacher is typically the central focus of a lesson and the primary disseminator of information during the class period. The teacher responds t....

The flipped classroom intentionally shifts instruction to a learner-centered model in which class time explores topics in greater depth and creates meaningful learning opportunities, ..."

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