Could you check this please?
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Could you check the following please?
"They concluded from their studies that doing homework, repeating and practicing, questioning and answering, and discussing educational contents were a part of class activities that replaced teaching in traditional classroom. This would lead to classroom dynamics, greater motivation and deeper learning. In addition, language learners are more actively involved in learning and creating knowledge and gradually become independent learners."
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That's good. I'm not a fan of using "and" twice in a series, but it's not wrong. knowledge, and they become independent learners.
- That's good.
- I'm not a fan of using "and" twice in a series, but it's not wrong.
- knowledge, and they become independent learners.
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That's good. I'm not a fan of using "and" twice in a series, but it's not wrong.
The last sentence can be improved; use parallel structure You could use "becoming," or you could make the part after the last "and" a clause: ...knowledge, and they become independent learners.
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