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I would like to apply for the position of Civil Engineer of your company. (or in your company? and name of profession with capital letter?)

I would like to start a job which (or that?) give me an opportunity to self-realization and improve my skills. (or improving my skills?)

I do not have great professional experience, however I am open to new challenges and I am ready to improve my qualifications.

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I would like to apply for the position of Civil Engineer in your company. (or in your company? and name of profession with capital letter? OK as written)

I would like to start a job which (or that?) give me an opportunity to self-realization<<< I don't think the employer will be very interested in your need for self-realization.
and improve my skills. (or improving my skills?)

I do not have great professional experience. However, I am open to new challenges and I am ready to improve my qualifications.

Where I live, an engineer is expected to be able to do the job to professional standards, and indeed must have a licence from an Engineering Society.

To me, your words sound too nervous and lacking in confidence.

Clive

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